Walking Away Comments

hey.... i liked the poem and the whole concept you had in your mind while writing it...but there are few things you should keep in mind.. Please dun use all capitals..please consult thesaurus for appropriate words... rest its a wonderful start and i loved the melancholy in your poem..8+

I think your poem speaks for a lot of people out there. Your words ring true but, this poem is very sad. I am glad you are walking away. Don’t make the same mistake and return again some day. Start anew that’s what you should do!

absolute wonderful i really ike that i can feel the hate towards the other person.. yet again abbreviations when needed i say this bec. sometimes it will make the poem seem more deep and wise etc, also why the capitals? ? ? ? :)