Wanted To Be What You Saw In Me Poem by Scarred Unknown

Wanted To Be What You Saw In Me



Wanted to be what you saw in me
Begged for night and day
Wanted to be all you asked of me
Fallen to my knees

Screamin’ to you
Please forgive
I never ment to harm
Loved you with all that I had
Too bad that wasn’t enough

I tried to believe in you
I wanted to be what you wanted in me
I’d do all you asked
Just to see if I’d pass
I guess I’ve failed you and I

Screamin’ to you
Please forgive
I never ment to harm
Loved you with all that I had
Too bad that wasn’t enough

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Loves 03 August 2007

And it was enough. I just didni't meet the requirments.

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Sarah Loves 03 August 2007

The second and fourth paragraphs or whatever spell 'spilt.' Did you do that on purpose? Were you waiting for someone to bring that up to you? Maybe you didn't mean to at all. Clever though, whether conscious, or un-conscious. Good read. I give it a 9/10.

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