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This is a very beautifully written and expressed poem of unrequited love, Natasha, and it speaks quite well of an experience many of us have had in our lives. Most of us have met that someone who just rings all the right bells, but for some reason, hardly notices us, at least not in the way we would like them to. The flow of this superb poem was very good and there is a lot of detail in it that makes it all the more appealing to a discerning reader. Carl.