Tuesday, November 10, 2015

War Veterans Comments

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Their spirit beat the void, like the bird from out the ark.
Their soul was as a lampless sea.
Their thoughts came yapping and growling round them like a pack of curs.
They breathe to Heaven like vapor goes.
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Seth Yuhi Musinga
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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

'Their impulse came and went like fireflies in the dusk. Their eyes blazed like deep forests and glowed like blue coals. Their mind murmurs like a harp among the trees.' Interesting lines and a nice tribute to the war veterans.. A good use of similie here... Thank you for sharing Seth...

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