Monday, April 11, 2011

Washed Ashore Comments

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Whispers romance the moonlight,
you make love through the night
Beads of sweat cool in the breeze,
meandering the gaps of embraces tight
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Sandhya Suri
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Artem Urlapov 11 April 2011

Very good! I particularly like here the way you repeat and connect lines. This is one very well written, emotive and beautiful piece.

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