Monday, March 31, 2014

Wasp's Wings Comments

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The wasp lands on my chest.

I know love comes not a whirlwind
but a quiet whir of the wasp's wings
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 01 April 2014

Thanks Valsa for the read. Sometimes love stings too.

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Valsa George 31 March 2014

Sweet poem! But instead of the wasp's wing, why can't it be the fluffy flake's soft landing? Enjoyed!

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