Thursday, November 5, 2009

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EVELYN MAGANA
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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

Very interesting way of presenting this poem. I would suggest breakiing it up into lines so others may easily understand the flow of the piece. It has great rythym but is bunched together that it kinda loses it effect. nonetheless great poem that's pleasing to the ears. and insightful to the eyes.

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