Water Poem by Jason Daniels

Water



This feeling flooded my soul
As your sight did take its toll;
Beauty far greater than the sea
Yes, had somehow noticed me.
But on the day we say good-bye
Rain will fall down from this eye
For I will hate to see you go
My heart will melt just like the snow.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 05 April 2010

i like this one. good job with the comparison with your soul and an element. its creative.

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