Friday, March 5, 2010

Water Comments

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This feeling flooded my soul
As your sight did take its toll;
Beauty far greater than the sea
Yes, had somehow noticed me.
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Jason Daniels
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(: God's Wild Child :) 05 April 2010

i like this one. good job with the comparison with your soul and an element. its creative.

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