Water Above, Water Below Poem by Diane Lee Moomey

Water Above, Water Below



The lights are going out, dear—one
by one. Circuits short—listen! the crack

of lines downed, drowned by water rising
from the dark beneath our feet. Wicks,

damp, go limp, collapse in lipid puddles,
hissing. Flashlights flicker, fail in swamps

new-made by dams broken, oaths broken.
Water goes where water will, filling:

water mixed with gas, soaking wood,
bringing to the surface pestilence

once hid. Listen! filaments of bulbs—
bright, their wires thin as hairs—now snap.

Tungsten ringlets droop. One shakes the glass
in disbelief—only tinkling

within. The lamps are going out, dear,
one by precious one and it's for us

to choose to live in darkness or, blind
and trembling, make for higher ground

and set ourselves alight.

Sunday, February 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,social comment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a post-election riff on the I Ching, Hexagram #29, K'an K'an: Danger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alexis 01 March 2018

this is a good poem that you wrote good job

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Florence Clark 11 February 2018

Your poem is visceral as it is lovely. What a twist at the end! As one who has long appreciated nature I admire the social commentary offered up by your unique poem. The winding couplets work well to create a an unforgettable nexus - between water and electricity. Florence A Clark

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Diane Lee Moomey 11 February 2018

I appreciate the thoughtful feedback - thanks. I love your expression winding couplets - I'm adding that to my poet's vocabulary. Very helpful. Diane

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Diane Lee Moomey

Diane Lee Moomey

Oceanside, New York
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