Water Above, Water Below Comments
The lights are going out, dear—one
by one. Circuits short—listen! the crack
of lines downed, drowned by water rising
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Your poem is visceral as it is lovely. What a twist at the end! As one who has long appreciated nature I admire the social commentary offered up by your unique poem. The winding couplets work well to create a an unforgettable nexus - between water and electricity. Florence A Clark
I appreciate the thoughtful feedback - thanks. I love your expression winding couplets - I'm adding that to my poet's vocabulary. Very helpful. Diane
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4/4/2026 4:25:28 PM # 1.0.0
this is a good poem that you wrote good job