Let the turbulance approach.
Let the calamity conquer;
Leat all the brittle be broken.
Let us see what remains!
Let the tough times come.
Let fate play it's game too,
Oh! Let us fall hard.
Let us see if we're strong enough.
Let the hater arrive
Let the jealousy survive.
Oh! Let all the evil be seen,
Let us se how good reigns.
Let the skeptics come too,
Let love be thrown out.
But love will crawl back in.
And we will see we're strong enough.
Howsoever strong the devil and its evil forces may be, love is going to be the ultimate winner. I love this message, I love this poem. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is an enjoyable read. (2 typographical errors, line 3 and line 12) The lines Let love be thrown out. But love will crawl back in. might be simplified Let love be thrown out. It will crawl back in. beyond that you might see if any words can be intensified or possibly calmed down. thrown out might be cast out or cast down(implying like a demon) crawl back in, are you sure love crawls or does it come back like the wind or the tide Let the jealous survive. do you want them to arrive or to thrive. either way it should not rhyme with the line above it. It rhymes nowhere else. It is distracting. I think this poem could be strengthened I give it 8 out of 10