We To Us Poem by JenOfPoetry METAPHORICALLY SPEAKING

We To Us

Rating: 5.0


What am I doing with you
My heart loves you strong
My mind tell me I am in for heartbreak
For a longtime now we have know each other..
Best friends we have become..
Do I take the risk and be happy for the moment
Am I smoking on that pipe called dreams…wishing and hoping we make it.
How much of myself to I put into you…
What is wrong with being just friends
I can still care for you
I can still be your rock and you mine.
Something deep in my heart is trying to come out..
Suppressing is causing pain…
A moment of mental intimacy I told you I loved you…
Your eyes gazed at me in awe saying you loved me too…
Do we have the same kind of love
Afraid to detail the feelings
Uncertain...curiosity take over fear
Mental collaboration… sorting out the pro’s and con’s of the what if’s
Love me or in love with me you ask
Responding back.. Both
What would I be if I didn’t know you
What where would I be if you were not here.
Trying to hold back these feelings… painful..
Releasing them gives relief..
Now the door is open
Do we close it or keep it open
Do we risk the WEfactor and further explore the possibilities of US…
Confident in US you take my hand
A tender kiss of love assures me…
Us can be forever…
Best friends and lovers…
Beautiful as the Heavens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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