Weakness Poem by Qwerty Poems

Weakness

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Innocence never lasts.
Joy always flees.
Hope eventually dies.
Life always subsides.

The needy don't survive.
Only vultures thrive.
You cannot hide.
They want you to die.

They sense weakness
And exploit it earnestly.
They will try to fool you my dear.
But now you know their intentions, unlike me.

Thursday, April 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hopelessness,life,life and death,weakness,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2017

You are presenting a reality. but we shall not fall into despair.. inspite of all hoeplessness and sense of weakness, one should fight through and come up. thank you for this presentation of a reality we all sense once in a way in life.

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Poet Without_a_brain 20 April 2017

I love your positive outlook on life almost the same as mine.

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