Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Were Not Through Comments

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I think about you during everything I do
This realationship got some gas before we through
we sing a duet like my boo
I ain't got to lie to you
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Triston Jackson
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Tyler Nichols 23 November 2006

I liked it :) I think your poem is a lot better than mine! Good job... But as I read it I saw some words were missing, I know it is a poem but I think it would work just as good with them included, it would still have the same beat.

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Lauren Frazier 21 November 2006

Wow..just wow. Keep writing 'cuz these are insane.

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Triston Jackson

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