Were You Out There Poem by david cozzolongo

Were You Out There

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The people didn't know/They did not know who was getting killed/who was gambling/who was lucky. The people did not know who they were killing. They did'nt know. Do you know who they killed. Did they know who was dying./Why is it dark/in the middle of the day/Why is it thundering Who is the person we are killing.Whats that. That homespun. Why is it dark/why is it thundering. What/the Son of God/the Son of Man/Who are we killing.Im very afraid. Now he is forgiving us/We don't understand.Who are we killing./Lets walk away./We don't understand.
You killed him/ you my Master./You killed Him but you freed me./ Who am I. Why did you free me and kill my real master. Were you out there/Were you out there/ Who did we kill. Oh know/ Who is He. We don't know/Were you out there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 18 July 2010

A beautiful style of knocking at the conscience. Lucid but cracking the conscious. Who kills and to whom! ! ! ! ! ! Again I tell, its not only a writing to be awarded, its an appeal to the human civilization to think again.......Be a saver, not a killer......you me they alls are one by the hand of almighty. Excellent writing. Write more poet......write more............ Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla

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