What Are We Afraid Of? Poem by Eloida Capuno

What Are We Afraid Of?

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We came close
almost there
And yet we hesitated
What are we afraid of?
The heart feels what the
eyes fail to see
And though it may seem
unattainable
Hope brings anticipation
Of what might be

Should we let our fears
take the better of you and me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahan Zeb 19 November 2012

So close but your last line is taking it more closer. and I like The heart feels what the eyes fail to see Fears always try to..... Depends on the mind.

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