What Could Have Been... Comments

I gave this a 7 because I just don't feel the words or phrases are as well collected as they should be. There was one good section. That was worth reading, but the rest simply was not. It is a common theme that was obvious in the first lines which made it predictable and the approach was void of creativity. Still, with all that, it came close with a 7. I guess I'm a little torn because I know the effort being made. GW62