Tuesday, November 17, 2015

What Did I Do, I'm Sorry. Comments

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Mum, one day I got really
depressed and I wanted to die.
You were really supportive and
kind to me. I tried to kill myself once,
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Harry Collins
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Brian Mayo 17 November 2015

Why invest your emotions in someone bent on destruction? I'm sure your mother's heart is broken. The only one who can mend it is you. I suggest finding a reason to live. Maybe start living for others, if your own life is so unappealing. Go out and do a few good deeds for someone who needs 'em. Your poem is very powerful and sad. It's excellent, in fact, but terribly unpleasant to read.

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