Monday, October 17, 2016

What Doesnt Kill You! Comments

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On this metal wheeled bed he laid,
With every single breath delayed....
With life and death he struggled, day and night,
He wasn't going to give up, not without a fight....
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Heaz Rha'el
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Maveriqué Richard 25 October 2016

Nice write. I love your sense of Imagery.

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Heaz Rha'el 25 March 2017

Thank you Richard... I appreciate

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Heaz Rha'el 25 March 2017

Thanks a lot Richard

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 17 October 2016

It is real, what doesn't kill makes you strong. But the lady here in this poem strengthened by the hard and most hurtful way, death of her loved one. Although I was sad, but i enjoyed reading it. Welcome to poem hunter man, and I am looking forward to read your next poems, keep it up man.

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Heaz Rha'el 17 October 2016

thank you Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni...

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