What Happened To Our Horrible World Poem by abdulrahman muhmmad

What Happened To Our Horrible World



what happen to the world
there is no safe to say a word
as if you are fighting in a sowrd
we can't feel rest
as if we are doin test
every day there is a war
there is no any safe shore
there is no any day our world setted free
so our world is gloomy and dark
we want to say and bark
stop violence
to live happy with parents
but what we can do
accept sit on tv and watch every new
do we have to do anything few?
we only want to stop wars
we don't want any force
we want to live in peace
to rebuild every broken piece
you must to imagine as if everything is alright
then if you did. you are going to scream in fright
cuz you don't want change that bright
living in peace is the light
we want to live in rest
to do everything best
if you look at animals
there world like criminals
most weak animals live to be dinner
and the stronger one is the winner
they hope to find anyone to protect their life
they really suffer but they can't do nothing
they must live as its fated
as its known
live for stronger
and the brave will live longer
we have to stop terror
to don't live in horror
alot of kidz is dying
even not doing any exciting
what they did to be killed
they didn't live to build
poor childs for this life
poor life, who will survive?
if asked about my dream
i will say its totally clean
living in peace is my mean

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 20 July 2006

And living in peace is mine, also. I weep for your suffering, and I wish I had the power to make it go away. My only power is in writing poems to spread the word around the world - it is time for peace for ALL nations. I hear you, and I pray for you and your family and your countrymen. We are not all warmongers - we are the peacemakers, and through this site may we bond together for a better world. God Bless You, Linda

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Donny S 20 July 2006

wow........ I'm actually quite speechless....this is a brilliantly written poem - and I love the way you've incorporated all your ideas into a rhyme... Brilliant write....! ! ! Keep up the good work Mr. Muhmmad....a definite 10/10 rating for this! It's also going in my favourite poems list. Take care, - Dona -

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