What He Means To Me! Poem by Lucy Grainger

What He Means To Me!

Rating: 3.0

I couldn't stand to see him get hurt or lose him.
I don't want him to feel like i used him.
I'd hate to be the one to bruise him.
He is the answer to my prayers and he's climbed the stairs to my heart.
I dream of him at night until my computer's back in sight.
His messages bring light to my dark world.
I miss him when he's offline but he's constantly online in my head.
I don't wish to hug him, i wish to do alot more.
I want his muscly arms to send away my quarms.

Steve Yeager 11 March 2013

It's an okay poem I guess. It doesn't matter what the viewer thinks, just the poets feeling put into his/her work's' makes it the best poem ever written. Just think about it, not many people express their feelings through poetry. ~Steve

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Titi Dale 22 February 2013

This is perfect :) you express your love beautifully and this poem itself is beautiful: -) wonderful writing, Luce: P

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Mark Davies 22 February 2013

Not very good really, need to check spelling and qualms is not used correctly

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Sandy Player 22 February 2013

I like the line where it says hes constantly online in my head. The parrallels and comparisons used once for a sentence is something you do often; you should be proud that you have a style.

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