'What I Felt I Had To Do' Poem by Tineyjo Langley

'What I Felt I Had To Do'

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This is something for someone very special he knows who he is I can't explane
it right now I did what i felt i had to do

You asked me if i loved yes this i do i said i would never leave you and turned
and walked away i asked you not to hate me i did what i felt i had to do
i never ment to hurt you never ment to make you cry its all i could do not to
turn and look into your 'Angel eyes' i know i done you wrong when i left
i didn't come back but i'm sorry and please don't hate me i did what i felt i
had to do i saw the pain in your eyes the day i left ill remember my love for you i'll never forget there is never enough words to say how sorry i am and
how i miss you so i tried to call you and let you know friendship means more
to me than nothing at all please dont hate me i did what i felt i had to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnamed Unnamed 10 September 2005

Hey there. The only thing I can really say is that there are some punctuation and grammatical errors here. If you want me to tell you what they are, I'd be happy to tell you, but I'm sure you could find it. How old are you? I'm 17. Go read my poem 'From Brown to Green' and give me brutal honesty about it please. What I like about your poem here is that you sound genuinely hurt and I like that I have no idea what happened to you. It's mysterious, you know? Alright, I'll talk to yeh.

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Tineyjo Langley

Tineyjo Langley

portland oregon
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