What Is Wrong With You Poem by Bethany Mujahed

What Is Wrong With You

Rating: 4.5


Come on people,
Its time to open up your eyes now,
Look around you sunshine,
This world is wiked,
It is no longer the nice place to live.

There are killings everywhere you turn,
Theifts living amongst you trust,
Having to see your friends get killed by gangs,
Getting srewed over by landlords,
People talking behind your back.

I swear these days,
People really needs help,
What citizens from wherever should do is,
Make community places to help people,
Like feeding them, clothing them, getting them a job,
Or whatever you can think of,
And maybe that should stop bad things,
Then the world will be at peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 31 August 2011

I don't see this poem as negative, I see it as positive. This poem encourages people to open their eyes and see what the world has come to. This is beautiful.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 30 August 2011

Sometimes we see the world in horrible ways... It is the world past, present, and future. To change it first we must be willing to change ourselves. It is good poem though it also is a very negative poem. But thats reality.

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