Tuesday, July 5, 2016

What It Feels Like Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is two fathers punching each other in the footy sheds
shadows extending over the river flats

over the bachelor nursing a long neck on his porch
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Brendan Ryan
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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2016

The employment of insightful similes in your lovely piece of poetry to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Brendan. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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