Monday, February 10, 2014

What No One Sees Comments

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In the shadows I hide...
And at night I ride...
Because in the dark I find tranquility...
But somehow someone saved me...
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Levi Crum
Ashes
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Francie Lynch 10 February 2014

Your imagery should sustain your theme with reason (i.e. where did the ashes come from) . Sometimes brevity needs more soul. Keep crafting your work til you say I can't improve it one more letter.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 February 2014

new life to lead, good writing, thanks.

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Levi Crum

Levi Crum

Missouri, United States
Levi Crum
Levi Crum
Missouri, United States
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