Friday, December 14, 2007

What's Left Of Me... Comments

Rating: 5.0

disappointment at heart,
fatal attraction that keeps me on a bar,
climbin higher just to see me fall,
nearly dead,
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Dislocated Heart
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Mz.Honesty Only 15 January 2008

This is the second poem i seen of yours. You are very talented.You should keep writing them, you can get somewhere one day.

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