Eli J Tod


Whats Spinning In My Head.. - Poem by Eli J Tod

What’s spinning in my head
Is destined to stay
Lest it pass my lips
And the world comes crashing down.

Other things spoken instead
But not the things that I should say
You should watch as I shake my hips
And use these crimson lilacs as my crown.


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  • (5/29/2006 2:10:00 PM)

    Love it Eli, Welcome to poem hunter. Smiling at you, Tai (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 2, 2006


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