travis jones

Rookie - 203 Points (3/12/1991 / tulsa oklahoma)

Wheather A Fluttering Feather/Remains To Be Seen - Poem by travis jones

Whether a fluttering feather
Flutters because of the weather
Or is led by the string
Of some unseen being
Perched high atop the heather

Topic(s) of this poem: angels , natural, spiritual

Form: Limerick


Comments about Wheather A Fluttering Feather/Remains To Be Seen by travis jones

  • Rajnish Manga (12/4/2015 9:36:00 AM)


    Amazing interpretation of the fluttering of flag. It could either be due to breeze or due to providence. This is a thought provoking philosophical premise. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (12/3/2015 11:03:00 PM)


    perched high atop, good one.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 3, 2015


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