When Poem by ashley craddock

When

Rating: 5.0


when im around you i cant help but blush,
when i think of you a glow comes to my eye,
when you hold me i feel unafraid,
when you kiss m i feel complete,
when i feel the warmth of your body i feel safe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 30 October 2011

Amazing! A few powerful words that clearly shows your poetic talent! 10+++ This is just the beginning and I can imagine later on! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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