When Christ Was Born Comments

great fluency witth the short lines and good rhymes. the last line sorta confuses me b/c i don't know what's the same, but the rest i really love and its nice that you bring children and song into it since they are always viewed as innocent and cute and pure and angelic and whatnot, sooo... yeah :) Kath

'The story's the same'...the last line perfectly echoes the cylic beauty of the ideas, words and the poem. a difficult read..i must admit...but sure has depths...it questions and seeks....m still figurin' it out.