Tuesday, October 2, 2018

When Doves Cry Comments

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Sitting by that rock we used to gather
when we were children, to gather
All the beautiful memories of childhood
I wish to see you again, to tell you
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 November 2018

Remember how beautifully mysterious This world was? The stars had joy Engraved on their shiny bright bodies The sun was a warm blanket And the rain was tender and smooth...memories....... poetic lines full of joy and beauty. tony

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Ntsako Manhisa 02 October 2018

It's funny how all life's inevitables are the most daunting experience Like growth and death. This poem deserve 10+++ life was said to be a crystal stair a paved footpath under a galaxy of stars Perhaps a holiday in Mauritius Now I want to be five again

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