Wednesday, November 11, 2015

When Fear Breathes Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can feel our souls twisting as one every time I hear your name
I can see our hearts beating in sync, every time I see your face.
If only through the air, I can still feel what we both fear
I see it, breathe it, live it, dream it, in my dreams it's your voice I hear.
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Justin Terrell
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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 November 2015

I truly believe that your eyes, your lips, your soul is my fate. Mind blowing. The flow of passions is superb through out the poem and it declares loudly how sincere the love of the two is. Excellent write. Enjoyed the poem. Ten ++ points.

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Justin Terrell 12 November 2015

Thank you very much. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it.

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