We want so much to serve The Lord
We’d like to be the head
We’d love to wield a mighty sword
But not where truth has led
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you sound quite classic in the composition of this verse... The message of your verse will definitely spread and turn the mankind from EROS to AGAPE...that is have complete faith in Christ...and his altruistic teachings..
Its really a nice composition full of pure prayer and universal truth.Man has lost his way.But it is his nature.So God forgives him for he can not see man in trouble.A very spiritual poem full of the hope of salvation.Good job.