Chanae Wise

When I Cry The Sky Cries With Me

Tears drop on my pillow,
Rain drops on the land,
I wipe away tears with the back of my hand,
The sky is littered with lightning bolts,
Destruction and chaos is all that is caused.

The sky acts like a drain,
Emptying my sorrows that's mixed in with the rain,
When i cry the sky cries with me,
Crying in sync, releasing our pain.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 20, 2013

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  • Katelin Offord Harper (6/20/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    the poem is really good i like it you are very talented keep it up

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (6/20/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    The title is superb and the write so nice, i love this! keep it up_Soul

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (6/20/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    good poem, thanks, I like it.
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