When I Cry The Sky Cries With Me Poem by Chanae Wise

When I Cry The Sky Cries With Me



Tears drop on my pillow,
Rain drops on the land,
I wipe away tears with the back of my hand,
The sky is littered with lightning bolts,
Destruction and chaos is all that is caused.

The sky acts like a drain,
Emptying my sorrows that's mixed in with the rain,
When i cry the sky cries with me,
Crying in sync, releasing our pain.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my very first poem on here please tell me what you think.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katelin Offord Harper 20 June 2013

the poem is really good i like it you are very talented keep it up

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 20 June 2013

The title is superb and the write so nice, i love this! keep it up_Soul

0 0 Reply
Gajanan Mishra 20 June 2013

good poem, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success