Thursday, June 20, 2013

When I Cry The Sky Cries With Me Comments

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Tears drop on my pillow,
Rain drops on the land,
I wipe away tears with the back of my hand,
The sky is littered with lightning bolts,
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Chanae Wise
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Katelin Offord Harper 20 June 2013

the poem is really good i like it you are very talented keep it up

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Unwritten Soul 20 June 2013

The title is superb and the write so nice, i love this! keep it up_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 20 June 2013

good poem, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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