Hazel Connelly

When I Let Go

A guiding light to illuminate the way
I'll follow the light to seal my fate
The spirit of me to reawaken.

Yesterday I let go of what I am today
I hold the key to unlock the gate
To change the path that I have taken.

Today I accomplish what I set out to do
With ambition I set out the program
There's always a choice you see.

Tomorrow I set out on paths anew
When I let go of what I am
And become what I might be.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 6, 2011
Poem Edited: Saturday, December 10, 2011

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  • Roy Toddington (11/7/2011 5:50:00 PM)

    Love your structure of rhyme - abc, abc, def, def - nice one!

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