Tuesday, June 28, 2011

When I Look At You Comments

Rating: 4.3

When I look at you
I don’t want to look away
Your face brings joy to my heart
I never want to leave your side
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Bianca Mckay
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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