When I Met You Poem by stacie jessica peters

When I Met You

Rating: 5.0


when i first met you i thought 'what a fool'
when i started to know you i begun to find you cool
when we became close i started to care
when we became lovers i couldnt imagine
life with out you here
when we broke up, you broke my heart
when we tried again i saw it as a new start
when you broke my heart for the second time
i realised you never were mine
and now i'm just laying here
trying to heal my broken heart and stop my tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Konstantin Filipov 15 July 2010

With only a few sentences you have captured the whole life of a relationship. You poem starts as a relationship - beautiful and full of hope, but it just collapses with time. A wonderful job, thanks for sharing!

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Tiffany Jade Stedman 01 September 2009

thats bootiful stacie ily xxxx

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