When I? ? ? Part Two! ! Poem by bushra hussaini

When I? ? ? Part Two! !



When i will be independent,
from the people, who validate me.

When i will able to make choices,
and forgive myself for making mistakes.

When i will stop to smile,
with broken heart and bruised soul.

When i will be downright and honest,
niether shying from future nor escaping from past.

When i will be accepting me to myself,
my ideas, my morals, my personality.

When i will start living my own life,
pushing judgemental world at bay.

When i will learn to stand on ground,
without needing too much love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Soni 15 June 2010

oh oh dear i am speechless. i think that this is the most beautiful piece u have ever written. the beauty of your poem is simply ineffable. i believe its not the words that make a poem beautiful but its the emotions that do. and you have poured down your true feelings and emotions very beautifully. i am in love with your art.

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