Fredrick McDonald

Rookie - 5 Points (Seneca Falls, N.Y. now in Genoa N.Y.)

When I Think About You - Poem by Fredrick McDonald

when i think of you,

My heart will stay with you.
As a painter touches his brush to a canvis,
Never in a hurrynot so fast to rush.
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As we know as we know our love will never be rushed,
Never asking our selfs is this wrong?
Dieing to tell you how i feel,
~
With every touch or movement you show.
In every word you speak is like a song,
Forever in your arms.
Eternity of happy ness and love,
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For our love is like an eternal flame.
Our life will begin the heavens will open our hearts,
Real emotion is what we feel.
Extending my arms to let you in,
Vibrant touch of your lips is like a wild fire burnning out of control.
Exept or passion never letting it drift upon the wind,
Relax with this fate of ours as it is written with in the stars


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 10, 2006



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