When Love Becomes A Stranger Poem by david gerardino

When Love Becomes A Stranger



WHEN the flies hang their
hats, this love is dead.
WHEN a stitch is torned
out, this love is dead.
WHEN we blind fold our
words, this love is dead.
WHEN you become a stranger,
this love is dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 16 June 2012

sweet poem but you can't say 'torned' it isn't a word in English, you can say torn so it will read, 'when a stitch is torn out'

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