Wednesday, December 14, 2016

When She Moved On Comments

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The only one i ever loved moves now on,
away from the ghosts of our past,
she moves on.
greeting her present with the future,
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Lancealot Whiteknight
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2019

The nostalgic scent of our time together, reappears itself in the present gloomy weather, she moves on. A sensation of freedom is what comes to me, for the love i once bore has now ended, love and separation. all the pain linger in the soul and we remember. tony very good poem.

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

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