When The Sky Become Dark Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

When The Sky Become Dark



When the sky become dark
The moon left with stars
I will not worry cause u with me
your eyes shine and make the light
Bright every where
So I will not worry if the sun hide
your arms make me worm
If the world come small
I will not worry your heart is my home
If all left me alone
I will not worry cause your my friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ershad Mazumder 13 October 2008

Very good theme and expression. Read it repeatedly and edit further.

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Reshma Ramesh 13 October 2008

very nice........u should replace all the coz with cause...its poetry...not sms...well done

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