Monday, May 31, 2010

When The Sky Fell Down Comments

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Grey skies paint a dismal picture
Of a land once kissed by the sun,
Though now it may not burn color
Into a land once won.
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Undead Perez 31 May 2010

Wow, this is great. I love the last stanza! ! It's so real and it makes you think why in fact the sky has turned gray when its meant to be blue for America. Perfectly written: D

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