When Two Things Transform Comments

You have concisely and tightly expressed an idea I too am very convinced of, that is, the ceaseless transformation of the things outside and also inside of us, It's hard to find the words that will express this idea both directly and clearly, but I think your poem does a very good job of just that. Of course, it's couched in general language, almost like a philosophical statement. It would be interesting to write a parallel poem in which you embody the theme in imagery.