Saturday, June 29, 2013

When Will My Dream Come True? Comments

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I dream of my land with harmony abound,
No crimes and thefts, and burglaries around,
Any child in the way screaming in pride,
I am safe and sound and no need to hide.
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Ramesh Shrestha
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Rajesh Natamsha 12 February 2015

Awesome poem! What a dream. I was hypnotized. Thank you Ramesh jee.

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Its Me 10 July 2013

Nice thought! ! ! :)

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Ramesh Shrestha 30 June 2013

Thanks Dave. Motivated to create more lovely poems :)

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Dave Walker 29 June 2013

We all need our dreams, a great poem.

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