When You Left Poem by chelsi Ruffing

When You Left

Rating: 5.0


When you left
You took apart of me with you
That part I can never get back
I lost all hope
I'm going to fall
Now you can take that all back
Have you not cause enough pain for me
Why must you be you
Stop takeing my loved ones
Its just not fair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vanessa Deroma 01 May 2006

PPPRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEETTTTTTTYYYYYYYYY...and sad.... a poetic tragedy so to speak. its beautiful! vanessa d.

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