Tuesday, June 18, 2013

When Your Comments

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When your sad I'll be your clown.
When your angry I'll be your punching bag.
When your cold I'll be your blanket.
When you cry I'll be your shoulder.
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sarah wilksch
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Khairul Ahsan 04 July 2013

Nice words, reassuring! Keep writing.

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Rakshita Gupta 27 June 2013

This is a double sided poem, more an overall pun. The reader can consider the former lines been said to a lover or a friend. then the latter part shows that it actually goes for a friend. Good work. I like such puns. Keep it up. And in the meantime, you are invited to check out my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

good and true friend is rare, I like it, thanks,

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