Where No Flowers Can Grow Comments

I like this Robert. But you still have this penchant for using the last line of the poem as the title; you do it quite often, which can be monotonous after reading several poems. I clicked onto the poem next to this one and you did it there too. You're too thoughtful for such a lazy gimmick as that. Work on creating interesting titles that compliment or offset the poem, or even deepen it. Truly, the 'last line as the title' trick compromises a good poem. -LP